Salut tout le monde !
Je m'essaie à l'écriture... en anglais, je préfère préciser tout de suite, parce que je regarde GG en anglais et donc j'ai les voix des persos en tete dans cette langue, et puis c'est un bon exercice... par contre je suis pas tout à fait bilingue donc si vous trouvez des fautes, n'hésitez pas à me le signaler
Ca fait déja quelques mois que j'ai commencé à écrire ça (surtout dans le bus, ça passe bien le temps!) et là je me décide à partager avec vous.
L'histoire se situe au cours de la saison 3, avant que l'auberge de l'Indépendance ne prenne feu (ça n'a pas tellement d'importance mais il fallait bien choisir un moment), et est un peu particulière puisque j'ai ajouté des personnages que vous reconnaitrez rapidement... enfin je vous laisse vous faire une idée avec les premières scènes et si vous aimez je posterai la suite
Prologue : sunday, unknown timeTwo girls are sitting in a plane above the Atlantic ocean. They’re talking together.Sue : You sure the reservations are ok ?
Marie : Pourquoi tu me parles en anglais subitement ?
Sue : Well, we’ll be in America in less than two hours so we should get used to talk in English !
Marie : Oh ok, not a bad idea !
Sue : So the reservations…
Marie : Oh yes… don’t worry it’s ok, I called the inn last week and you know what ? I’ll never forget that, it was a really really weird conversation! First a man hung up just saying “hello”, no presentation, nothing ! I mean, you know, when you call an inn or a restaurant of something, people usually tell you where you are but there, NOTHING ! So I didn’t know if I had composed the good number and naturally I asked if I was at the Independent Inn and he said yes. Then I asked for the reservation, I thought he would ask me some precisions but instead of that he said something like “Oh so you’ll be here for Easter ! Do you want me to reserve little chickens for you ?”
So I was really surprised and I thought I had misunderstood but before I could say anything more I heard some other guy with a French accent yelling at the first one that he shouldn’t be answering the phone or even be there. Then the second man took the phone and began to talk to me. Since he had this French accent I asked if I could speak French with him but he told me he did not speak French coz’ he was coming from Texas. I did not believe him but I said nothing and I continued in English. Anyway he finally took the reservation !
Sue : Waw… they seem to be a little crazy… I hope it’s going to be fine !
Marie : I hope so… we’re only there for 10 days : first this biology congress I have to go but it’ only two days, so if we have problems we can leave then and find some other place to stay !
Sue : Ok that seems right !
Scene 1 : Lorelai is sitting behind the counter desk working on the computer, Michel arrives and stops in front of her.Michel : Lorelai ?
Lorelai : Yes Michel ?
Michel : I have to inform you that some very annoying European people called earlier. They want to reserve some rooms and the conference room for a congress about disgusting animals for 2 days next week. Plus, they want us to prepare 33 big panels to paste posters on it.
Lorelai : Posters ?? what the hell are they going to do with posters ?
Michel : I don't know, maybe they like watching pictures while they talk…
Lorelai : Mmm… Anyway, can you buy these panels and prepare the conference room? I don't have time to do this…
Michel : And do you really think I have time to do this ? I already have a lot of annoying things to do here and I think it is enough.
Lorelai : Michel…
Michel (sighing): Alright…
Scene 2: Sunday night, at the inn.Lorelai : Michel did you prepare the panels in the conference room ? The congress begins tomorrow morning and the first guests are arriving today.
Michel : Yes I did
Lorelai : Right… Why are you suddenly smiling ?
Michel : I'm not smiling
Lorelai : Yes you are
Michel : No I'm not
Lorelai : Michel you…
Two young ladies enter the inn with huge bags and a big plastic tubeLorelai : Welcome to the Independence Inn, I'm Lorelai. May I help you ?
Sue : Hi Lorelai, my name is Sue and this is Marie, we're here for the biology congress and we reserved rooms for the week.
Lorelai : Of course, rooms 4 and 5 ! Here are the keys… If you have any questions, you can ask Michel. He's also speaking French !
Marie : Oh that's great coz my English is not always perfect !!
Michel : No I won't speak French !
Lorelai : Oh yes you will !!
Michel : No I won't
Lorelai : And here we go again !! Michel, we're not at school and you will do what I ask you to !! And now can you please help these girls with their bags and lead them to their rooms ?
Michel (sighing again) : Ok… suivez-moi young ladies…
Scene 3Later that night, at the inn
Marie comes from the conference room with her poster tube looking for someone. She has an interrogative look in the eyes, she notices Lorelai walking in the lobby... Marie : Excuse me… Lorelai ?
Lorelai (turns on her heels to face her): Yeah ?
Marie : I wanted to paste my poster in the conference room, I have to present my results tomorrow, but I saw there are already posters on the panels… posters of Céline Dion !?! Is that normal ? I’m not sure my colleagues will appreciate this…
Lorelai : What? What are you talking about? Ohhhh… wait wait wait…I think I know, I'm so sorry, I'm going to fix this, just give me a minute okay ? MICHEL !!!
Michel arrivesMichel : WHAT this time ?
Lorelai : Why are there posters of Céline Dion in the conference room ?
Michel : I don't know what you're talking about
Lorelai : Oh yes you know, you're the only person here who could have done this AND there are posters of Céline Dion on all the panels SO you must have put them there AND THIS is the reason you were smiling earlier when I asked you about the panels. Am I right or am I right ?
Michel : Ok, you're right, they wanted posters so I pasted posters, that’s it
Lorelai : But Céline Dion ??!?
Michel : She's an amazing singer and…
Lorelai (interrupting him): Michel, go with this young girl in the conference room and take off your stupid posters and don't even try to say something there !
(to Marie): I'm REALLY sorry, this won't happen again
Marie (smiling): It's ok, don't worry.
Scene 4Monday, 10.00 AM in the hall of the Independence Inn
Sue arrives in the hall coming from her room and bump into LorelaiSue: Oh, I’m sorry !
Lorelai: it’s ok ! oh by the way, I met your friend earlier and she asked me to tell you she’ll assist to conferences this morning and she doesn’t know if she’ll be there for lunch. She also wanted to remind you that her presentation is at 4.00 PM if you wanna be there.
Sue: Thanks a lot ! I’ll be there !
Lorelai goes away obviously in a hurry and Sue approaches the counter desk where Michel is standing.Sue : Excuse me, I know , I’m late but I really need coffee, do you think I could have some ?
Michel: No I’m sorry we don’t serve breakfast after 9 AM.
Sue: Yeah, I know, I overslept but please I don’t want to eat I just want a cup of coffee, I need it to survive ! If I don’t get caffeine I’m going to collapse right here! You don’t want that to happen, do you ?
Michel: I’ll call 911. Now leave me alone I’m busy and you’re disturbing me.
Michel goes away without a look at Sue who stays stunned. She seems shocked and It takes her a moment before she thinks of following him… but it’s too late !Sue (talking to herself) : What a way to treat the guests… c’est grossier, jamais vu ça !
She decides to go out of the inn to find a coffee shop in town...Scene 5 :At the same time, in the kitchen of the inn.
Sookie is turning frantically the pages of a cooking book when Lorelai enters.Lorelai: Sookie, coffee !!
Sookie : What ? Oh I’m sorry Hon there’s no coffee… I’m going to make some !!
Lorelai: No coffee ? Are you kidding ? How could you forget the coffee ? That’s not like you !
Sookie: Oh I’m sorry I was just busy with some stuff here and I forgot…
Lorelai: Okay… so, what are you doing ?
Sookie (continues to turn pages): Searching
Lorelai: Searching WHAT?
Sookie: A recipe
Lorelai: Sookie??? WHAT recipe ?
Sookie: Well, a recipe with these tiny little shrimps… can’t find it…
Lorelai: What ? What shrimps? I really don’t know what you’re talking about ! I thought you wanted to cook chicken tonight !
Sookie: Yes I know but I changed my mind when I saw these shrimps on the poster in the conference room, they’re so cute !
Lorelai: Oh God no, not these posters again ! What do you all have with these posters, it’s crazy ! These are just disgusting animals with horrible legs everywhere euw !! And moreover I don’t think you can eat that !
Sookie: Oh no, I’m sure we can ! And they’re so cute with their little eyes staring at you.
Lorelai: A shrimp can’t stare at you, it’s far from cute, and you can’t eat these particular shrimps, trust me ! Go back to chicken or find something else !
Sookie (sighing): Okay…
Scene 6Sue arrives in Stars Hollow and finds a place looking like a diner, even if the sign says “William’s hardware”. She decides to take this chance to get coffee and enters. The place is empty, at the exception of two men who seem to be fighting, one of them is wearing a flannel shirt and a baseball cap and is yelling at the second one, an older man with a sufficient look on the face…Luke : Taylor, I already told you a hundred times that I WON’T decorate the diner with stupid yellow chickens for Easter and nor will I paint yellow flowers on the windows, no matter what you can tell me !
Sue : Hum hum…
Taylor : This is silly Luke, you must absolutely decorate your place. All the town will be decorated and your diner is in the middle of this town, it HAS to be decorated I already told you that but…
Sue: Excuse-me ?
Luke (turning slightly to face her): WHAT ?
Sue: I’d like some coffee please…
Luke : Wait a minute !!
To Taylor : THIS is not silly Taylor, your stupid towns events are silly ! When it’s not red and golden stars for Christmas, it’s pink hearts for Valentine’s day, and now yellow chickens for Easter, if I listened to you this place would look like a decoration store from January to December !
Sue: Okay, that’s enough ! I don’t care about your stupid decorations, all I know is that I did not have coffee this morning because of that stupid French guy who refused to give me some because it was after 10, so I really need caffeine RIGHT NOW and I think I’m in a diner so you have to serve your customers !
Luke: Wow calm down ! Who the hell are you, Lorelai’s sister ?
Sue: No… I’m her guest but…
Luke (pouring her a cup of coffee): I certainly knew you were related to her… in a way, or another !!
Taylor: Luke I was talking to you ! Everybody in this town…
Luke: Taylor, OUT !!!!
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Sujet: Crazy holidays !! 
Sam 19 Mai 2007 - 15:59
j'adore j'ai complétement les voix dans ma tête aussi 
